Sunday, October 2, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Glazed

 "It doesn’t matter, because I can’t."

 “Why not?” His breath mingled with hers, and she could detect faint, smoky traces of the barbeque sandwich he’d had for lunch beneath the sweet tang of lemonade.

 Suddenly, she didn’t know why not. Leaning ever so slightly forward, she pressed her lips against his, only to have the reins firmly jerked from her hands as he responded, his mouth leaping into action beneath hers. He wrapped his arms around her, pulling her tight against his chest, squeezing the breath out of her in a sweet-and-tart rush.


Thanks for stopping by for this Sunday's six. : )

14 comments:

  1. I love how she changes her mind, yeah, why not! Nice job! Sensational six!

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  2. squeezing the breath out of her..mmm nice six!

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  3. Love his reaction and that she made the first move. Great six!

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  4. Why not, indeed? Sounds like her indecision is gone under a smoking hot kiss. Great six!

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  5. oh I love this. So sensual, with a touch of conflict. And that first line dragged me right in! Great six!

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  6. Like the use of senses. You do that really well. I can detect your style now after reading Taken Hostage!

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  7. Very hot! Thanks for sharing. :)

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  8. I really like this. Very real, and connecting.

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  9. "...the reigns firmly jerked from her hands." NICE!!

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